This was beautifully written. I can tell a lot of thought went into this. 5/5

What a beautiful poem you have crafted, Peter. The love you feel for this lady just pours from the words. It is very clear you have a caring and gentle heart:)

For her, her world is dark and cold,
and I so want to set her free

To have a life, a life with joy, a life with love
........ a life with me...

^^^

I love these lines especially!

Well done, my friend, well done:)

5/5 Ingrid

Nice rhyme as always. A beautifully sad, powerfully penned love poem, enjoyed reading it England/RHR hope you are well. XX

This is enchanting, it left me speechless, truly beautiful! One of your best poems I think, outstanding poem!!!! 1000000/1000000

I hope one day this dream comes true for you Peter! So loving a write you have penned..... Love can be felt in it.

Very well penned my friend! ~ ( as always) :)

Take care....

Very Nicely Penned Peter!!!

Ah peter I love your work! Your words are effortless and the flow is brilliant!! 5/5

Perfect. I almost felt as is If I were in the dream myself. Great flow and beautiful words.

Wow dear
Really lovely, romantic ,
Verryyyyy lovely dream

Beautiful and so amazingly romantic, another masterpiece!

This poem is beautiful

As I continue to revisit this poem I know it will forever be one of my favorites. No matter how many years go by I continue to remember this brilliant price of work. It always seems to bring a tear to my eye as well as a smile to my face; and I know every time I read this that my heart will begin to throb in need. I'm glad you created this memorable piece.

Hello Peter,

This a beautifully written in every way. I admire your talent.

A dedication of love with bells on.

Well done

Michael