This made me speechless. I love it!

I love the way you put it, I agree with QueenOfDarkness, really left me speechless too! Two thumbs up!

"My knuckles bear the wounds of war"- I love that line :)

This is an amazing poem!! So much emotions are captured in this poem!! Great work!!

Great powerful poem!Very good!

I love the style you used for this poem. It is a really good poem, and I can tell that you are extremely talented!! I like that you repeated the title alot, it kind of gives the poem a whole new meaning.

It was a very well written piece of work. The best I've read recently. The wording was creative and smart, and it told a great deal of emotion and thought.

I particularly enjoyed the two line stanzas.

However, I did feel the middle section had some flow issues, with lines like 'Oh mirror, mirror, on the wall, did you see me die before?' which I feel was a tad too long. I also feel that the last four lines of the middle section threw away the structure you set up.

Brad

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Excellent Write, Very Nicely Rhymed, Kudos!!!

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NOMINATED!!!

Deep powerful write that plays with the mind
As well as emotions...

Great imagery... flow and rhyme...

Brilliant write,
Into my favourites!!!

So much pain is expressed in the poem.
you also show how you can't stand yourself .
which isn't ever good.
really good poem .
I enjoyed the mirror mirror part. it reminded me of show white .
I enjoyed reading it

Dissociation desires of a higher self relation

Dissociation desires of a higher self relation

I love this poem because its definitely an eye catcher as the title drew me in!

The first two lines are so dark and emotional. But so great. Who is the darkest one of all which mean you don't like the person you see. I think we all feel this way though. We dislike ourselves so we masquarade thr person we want to see inside. As you say do I needthis disguise? SSometimes we feel the mirror is our worst enemy like there is a monster inside of us. That monster is depression no doubt making us feel so mentally unstable. I love the poison line because it truly is. We feel sad and its poison to our health.

I love the eyes are wet line as we don't even know why we cry at all sometimes. Yessss does that mean I havea heart yet is a perfect line bbecause sometimes we need to feel something even sadness to even see if we are still alive. Your knuckles are scar laced from the battles you have been fighting with yourself. No one can truly know what you feel inside but the way you destroyed your mirror because it seems like you needed something to help your insides. I love the emotions you portray you have to hide sometimes though. Its hard to show your true feelings to anyone.

You are the girl who is grieving. I love the poem as it holds so many elements of dark and sadnrss. 5/5