Love you mum

by Hemmy Leo   Apr 30, 2013


*Little angel crying*
DAD; "Honey, are you
okay?"
Daughter; "No dad. How can I be?"
DAD; "I understand why
your upset but your
mom wouldn't want you to
be like this."
*The doctor comes out*
Doctor; "She wants to see
her daughter."
Dad; "Go on honey."
*The little girl goes in the room only to see
her sick mother.*
Mom; "Honey have you
been crying?" *she
wipes her daughter's tears
off*
Daughter; "Yes, mommy. Are you gonna be
okay?"
Mom; "I'll be soon
enough."*smiles*
Daughter; "I can't wait for
you to come home
honey."
*The mother's eyes water*
Daughter; "Why are you
crying mommy?"
Mom; "Nothing baby girl. I just really love
you."
*The daughter smiles and
lays beside her
mom. She falls asleep
quickly.*
*The little girl wakes up to
beeping sounds.
She looks at her mom. She
was still sleeping.
She shakes her hoping she
would wake up.
But no answer. She tries
again. Nothing*
Daughter; "MOM! WAKE
UP!"
*She realizes what had
happened but keeps
denying it.*
Daughter; "MOM! Come on!
Don't leave me.
Please!"
*The doctor comes in and
the dad grabs the
girl out of the room*
Doctor; "Date of Death;
10;30 pm"
*The daughter cries and
cries some more.*
-an hour later-
Dad; "Honey, your mom
wanted you to have
this."
*It was a letter. The
daughter opens the
letter*
"Dear princess,
Oh I love you so so
much.I'm so sorry to be gone this early in
your life.
Mommy was really sick,
there was nothing
the
doctors could've done.
Don't worry mommy is in a
better place now,
looking over you.
I have a feeling you're
gonna turn into a
remarkable young woman.
No doubt about it.
You have to always
remember to behave,
because it's only you and
your father now.
Take care of him for me?
I know you will. I'll always
be looking over
you my little angel. I love
you and that'll never
change.
Love, Mommy."
*The girl cuddle the letter,
remembering her
mom.*
Hit LIKE if you Love ur Mum, and Comment I
LOVE YOU MUM Whether she is dead or alive
because her Love lasts forever!

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  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    Alright I will say what I didn't like about this poem and then tell you my emotion view on the second paragraph alrighty then I didn't like that you used the ";" instead of ":" because that's what you're supposed to use I also didn't like that you made it like a script when you could've easily made it into a wonderful and beautiful poem hun you really could've I do like the part(s) where you do make an amazing job on the story although it's really sad and what I didn't like was the part about that we as a poet online aren't supposed to ask on our poems for comments hun either way 5/5

    Omg I wanted to cry I love my parents my mom is 70 and my dad is 69 love them all :) I liked the story
    -Moria Bella Bair