This was amazing Hannah , I'm always a big fan
Of your wording

Fingers tip toeing past unopened seat belts
It seems like nothing but the way you craft it into the poem it's so vivid and could mean alot if read a
Certain way ...

Well don't again

What can I say? I need to learn from you
5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

I too, am a big fan of your wording. You have an incredible way with words, tieing emotion and imagery behind them, but also being short and semi-simple. Your poetry always impresses me. (:

I love how well the beginning and the end of this poem tie in/contrast. It gives the poem an actual sense of being a flashback.

Also, something about this seems really dark, possibly the thoughts behind the poem. I think I have an idea what it's about but at the same time, it could portray different things to different people, so I won't say what it brings to my mind.

Wonderfully Penned Hannah!!!