I can always sense a free flow than I never can seem to achieve . My advice to you is keep writing the way you write through natural and supernatural talent and your fans will conform to your style rather than attempt change you. This one goes on my favorites so I may burn it into my memory

This is a really good poem. It holds alot of emotion, and i had to reread it a few times

I like this write...First Stanza: Your mind is search for love fulled words to describe what your emotions feel but the unattainable is found.
Second Stanza: The words you look for in feeling are not yet ready to be uncovered because how precious and haunting they must be not to be shared.
Third Stanza:Forever sealed by your own desire of self reflection.

Very well written it convey a lot of emotion it expresses a lot... 3 stanza a lot of strong and powerful lines on it...

I love that line!...burning is actually a form a therapy....to release memories, pain, anger, etc, therapists recommend for their patients to write things down and burn it after writing it...or after someone reads it.....i have never lit paper to fire, however I have thrown it away or crumbled it and it did feel good....

love the wording here a again, it created a really pretty flow. well done!

Superb Hannah!!!

Sometimes we feel the need to burn our thoughts, and writing is a release of those thoughts, so to burn our words means that those thoughts die a little, whether this really could be true, I am not sure, I never tried it, but I do screw up some poems that I feel weren't that good, not a representation of what I'm feeling but never burnt them...

I liked this, then flow was smooth and transitional, and the wording was powerful, and very natural.

Great piece...
xx

Nice this poem made me smile since the only reason i know what the heck "anemic" means is that i am anemic myself and it made me smile that what a thing would stand as a bad thing would be used to describe beauty and the other part that i totally loved in this poem that i love is the second stanza since that's pretty much me at times and again i gotta say i LOVE this poem! :) 5/5 from me

Ashlin