I don't think this is a funny poem, more of a sardonic piece. It has some soul and anger behind it.

Good work and I'm not sure what the word is supposed to be at 'you ve'. "would make sure i lied to you and promised you ve whole world"
You the whole world?

Either way I enjoy the atmosphere you can taste anger. 5/5

This piece needs some punctuation or to take advantage of line breaks. Other than that, i find it sad... Though I agree with the above comment... it's more of a sardonic piece. I gathered that perhaps, if women switched places with men... I guess they would do the same -.- just to see how they felt? hmm... I guess I could take this piece content into different directions.