Comments : In The End

  • 6 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    This is written so beautiful, it is intense and really got to me, wonderful poem, outstanding wording, and remarkable word choice and I love the flow, great poem!!!

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you :) A lot of things come to mind after a divorce, this was one haha. Thanks again

  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    Maher, an absolutely fantastic write as always by you.

    For all we do and all we've done
    Works hand in hand with the past
    And for all They lie and all They cheat
    Will have them finish last
    ^^
    This part really struck me down and winded me lol very powerful and true

    Em

    • 2 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Em, that part was my favourite also :)

  • 2 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Maher. Good to see a write from you. Its well perfection.. very powerful..
    Well done.

    • 2 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks USB, glad you like it :)