My scars tell a story

by Aubrey   May 30, 2013


My scars tell a story
they tell you my pain
that drives me insane
they tell you my past
with all my regrets that still seem to last

Tears fall down my face
as i sketch in another part
tearing my skin apart
craving the pain
letting the blood drip
like tears from my soul

So just sit and listen
and dont judge
and you will see
all the pain inside
all the tears I cry
as I feel myself die inside

So please
Sit and listen
Because my scars tell a story.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Stop using u for you and plz for please...these distract from the honesty and rawness of this piece. I love the title...all scars tell a story if someone cares enough to listen :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Sherwin Talapian

    I agree this one is a strong expressing poem great lines and strong words on it i like the 1st line :) great written very well poem you're super good my aubrey :) <3

  • 10 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Because my scars tell a story.

    the line is so quite, yet so strong. You are using the body in a new way.
    I could have been a metaphore, but this is so much stronger

    You don't call it a poem, but it is for me.

    • 10 years ago

      by Aubrey

      Wow ...thank u:)

  • 10 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Not really a poem ...more of just expressing my thoughts......but any comments on how to make it better will be great ....thanks:)

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