When im gone

by Sherwin Talapian   Jun 7, 2013


Now i don't know what to do
when i'm here, your not.
when i need you
you don't care.
i said i love you
but you ignore all those care.
i keep you smile when you're sad
keep you calm when you're mad.
i gave you all my time
and also dedicated this life.
but after that you kept denying
that we already have something.
now i know to you how i worth
after all for you i'm just nothing.
now i decided to leave
to stop this pain and continue to live.
this time i know for sure
that you're gonna miss me when i'm gone.

JUNE 07, 2013 11:48 PM
THIS POEM IS NOT DEDICATED TO WHOM. THIS IS WHAT MY MIND SAYS THANKS...

PLEASE CHECK AND CORRECT ME IF I'M WRONG THANKS...THANKS..

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  • 12 years ago

    by AppleChaz

    Although you don't dedicate it to anyone, this writing is definitely can be related by many of others. Most of the times, the person we need is not there and they will realize it only after it's too late... 5/5.

  • 12 years ago

    by dindee

    Hahahaha...really?? si hannah lizzete??you court her???ano basted ka??

    ahhhh...inedit mu???? sbi mu knina c lizzette ngaun si cathy???or both...?

    sherwin!!!share na,,,grupo...hahaha

  • 12 years ago

    by dindee

    Stick to one????or play and stick no one???hahahaha...peace.....wala daw....my sideline ka dto eh...share na....whos she?

    • 12 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Grabe wala naman talaga saka hindi nga ako ganun... eh wala naman talaga mga close friends ko lang un mga un... ung c cathy lang niligawan ko dito wala ng iba... grabe... judgemental mo ah...

      saka d ako nag sasabing GF ko cla... kasi mahirap na... long distance tpos GF ko sila ? mahirap... yung rono... close friend ko lang ask mo pa s'ya... yung EHU GIRL super friend means nun... yung aubrey hindi ko po gf un close friend ko lang din po promise... wala po akong gf....

  • 12 years ago

    by dindee

    Sherwin....since when you're broken???haha...all i know is...charaan... you break them...bleee......lol...

    bahala ka dyan...

    Nambola ka nnmn sa mga comment nila???
    hahahaha...lagot ka...

    • 12 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Grabe naman pla yun... d nman ako nambobola ah... saka d ako palekero..pala kaibigan lang po ako... dinz...

      stick to one lang ako. kaso wala pa nga eh.... malas lang...

  • 12 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Kinda sad, but great poem. Your emotions shine very strong in this piece :) awesome write from an awesome poet!

    • 12 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Aw.... an awesome poet ? thanks... but i don't think i deserve that tittle... super thanks madam.... :)

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