Beautiful and meaningful! I agree with u dear!

Thanks so much for entering the challenge, you done really well! :) You did exactly what I was looking for, choosing few words and creating a small, simplistic poem that just stands out from the blackened part!

You created such a meaningful poem with limited words and made it into something absolutely beautiful. <3

I must admit, I liked this poem the best from the challenge because I was amazed at the powerful little image it created, and the glimpse of a story it told, with just a few words. I agree with Hannah on this and think this challenge would be great at trying to limit the words to make a short poem.

You done really well and I love how enjoyable it is to read. Well done.

This is an intriguing style and one I haven't come across before. I followed the link but it didn't give me any information on this form. I'd love if you'd pm me with some info on it. Short yes, enjoyable YES!!!

This is beautiful -- simple, yet serene. It feels uplifting and quiet, peaceful. It's not a poem that screams out too much -- distracting the true message. Simply beautiful!

Great things come in small packages

This is awesome

In just five lines you have given a very true
statement of love and so very meaningful..very very nicely written!!

For being short and simple you created a great image and full emotional impact. That's definitely a great skill, and you've shown that skill remarkably well. Excellent piece