In my opinion, this wasn't very good.

Ha ha ha.

I appreciate the comedy in this.

But better luck next time.

...you can't really good "is" and turn the results into poetry.

Never the less, you made me chuckle - Well done!

Lol that was intresting and that i seriously all I can say!

It was very humorous, defiantly made me laugh, but not a very good poem, sorry :(