Hmm. I like the emotion in this.

It's sad and yet so true. Life and death are so fragile and it can be taken from someone so quickly. And it is always the people who deserve it the least.

And you constantly find yourself asking, "hey, why not me? I'm the one who wants to be gone."

It is such a thin line.

I love this poem and it works perfectly.

This is true and really relatable. Another good job, sweetheart.

I love how you portrayed "Death" as an actual being, like a person and not just something that occurs