Awww I love it and awww :-( -hugs- very very good

The horrors of falling for someone who won't even fathom the thought of being with you because of their religious values. This is heartbreaking.!

You paint a sort of delicate picture and really adds to the sense of yearn in the piece. It makes the readers connect more with your feelings and then there is the shock of the religious intolerance.

It is short but definitely drives home. I like the rhyme in a few places. Nice.

Nicely done.

Good job love.