To Xelina (Reverse Acrostic)

by Jademark07   Jun 30, 2013


Altered, never will they be
nor faded, nor vanished:
idyllic imageries I see
lying deep inside your soul.

Entangled, my ears become, into--
xylophonic melodies of you.

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 10 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    You have such an eloquent way of writing! In that first stanza, I love the placing of your words, how you seemed to save space and choose them with care to express the depth of this person's soul and what lies within, brightness, memories, and so much more. I admire how in a few words you could convey a lot between the words, in a way that's uniquely structured as well...this person's soul will remain pure and unchanged, still as vivid and lovely as the beginning.

    I really like the word "entangled" in this and the grace in which you write that these melodies you will never not be a part of or forget about. I also was thinking at the end you made this love poem based on a xylophone, then named the girl Xelina off of that! So creative!

    Beautiful brevity :]

  • 10 years ago

    by Sigoney Holder

    This is strange but beautiful.