It's Time

Hey, I like this poem

Hey, I like this poem

Hey, I like this poem

I like this poem because sometimes you truly have to let go.

First stanza- I love thd start of it because it truly makes the reader think. What is done? What has begun. The titld also makes you think as in it's time for what. I love thd mystery to it all. I love thd build up and lead into thd rest of the poem!.

Second stanza- I love the wording in this stanza it works well with the first lines because when you are pushing someone away they always want you to stay!

Third stanza- its never true that someone is stupid. If you want or have to leave a person because its their fault you should never blame yourself!

Fourth stanza- this stanza os my favorite because it sheds a light on why you are leaving and yoj need to leave. You cannot go unheard for your voice is powerful and you need to just leave this person! !

Ending- if you did get abused it really is u ncalled for and good for you! I liked how you wojld drop him to thefloor. Overall its a nice poem but its great you let your ferlings out. 5

Woooooh.....bai.......

"You tell me you are sorry,"
"You said it's all my fault,"

---he tells you sorry,,,but he was blaming you still...its not sorry for me...

"It's just a matter of time,
Before I tell of your abuse,"
--youre awakened by......all of the things happened between you two..

"Because what you did to me,
Was uncalled for,
You're lucky I stayed,
And didn't drop you to the floor. "
----its a biiig BANG!!!!!
ilove it!!!!!sorry for him...!

HIGH FIVE!!!!
SMIILE........=)