Awakening

by safachan   Jul 12, 2013


She sat alone trying so hard to figure out
thinking about what she did , was it wrong , was it not ?
a lonely life , full of regret and empty spot
she said no more for that , it hurts a lot
i want to smile i want to shout
i want to express myself without a single doubt
she thought it over and over inside her head
"i need someone to accept me for who i am" that's what she said
but where are you my other me
always searching for you , seeking for what's meant to be
my dream is keeping me alive so attractive yet dangerous like a bee hive
from now on i will do my best
from now on until i reach my goal i will not rest

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  • 10 years ago

    by TragicChaos

    Its very good. I like the way its written, but the rhyming and flow seem forced in some spots. But altogether a wonderful poem!! Keep it up :)

    • 10 years ago

      by safachan

      Thank you ^^
      i understand