Pain

by Mainey   Jul 17, 2013


Pain is not just what you feel
But also an emotion that can kill,
Day and night i feel this increasing pain
So I tend to search for ways to keep me saine,
This pain I feel I bottle up inside
I am a man so what I feel I try to hide,
I cover up my anger with a smile
But don't look to long because it only last a while

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  • 10 years ago

    by OKUNOLA KAYODE

    EXCELLENT

  • 10 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    I like this poem because it is true. I love the first two lines pain really can be a killer of all things. It can be all the bad emotions wrapped up into one thing. Nights are always the hardest. The dark can be a very cruel thing when you have to mask your pain. I like the ending too. Sometimes it does last for only a little while. Yet we can always overcome it if we tried. The only flaw I see is saine should be sane. But good overall. 4

  • 10 years ago

    by Bonaventure Onuabuchi

    Pain is not just what you feel......, but an emotion that can kill.......... But don't look to long.... It only last a while! Nice lines; I like it. Keep the pen alive.

    • 10 years ago

      by Mainey

      Thanks i appreciate that, this is actually the very first poem I wrote when I was like fifteen

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