Comments : Broken Heart

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I'm happy you made the changes..it reads well
    now. Memories are hard to erase not even tears
    can help the pain..touching write.

  • 10 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    I think this is a short but a well written poem :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Beautiful work!

    ~Nice opening:
    Each drop of tears I wipe
    Each stone of your memory I broke

    Compelling words and imagery.
    Really short, looking/wanting to read more.

  • 9 years ago

    by Larry Malbrue Jr

    Straight to the point