Comments : This England

  • 10 years ago

    by Abed

    What a portrayal of the discrimination still going in the world. I love your subliminal messages. Great job, you hold the ropes of your flow tightly!

  • 10 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I admire how you have constructed this poem with these rich thoughts, themes of discrimination and more importantly, negligence of such acts based on possible racial/political/religious standpoints.

    Interesting bits of dialogue I thought added to this piece well, as well as the name of the boy and repetition of it. I agree about the flow as well, it was well-done and the rhyming seemed natural when reading.

    Congrats on the win & take care!

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Such an emotional write which shows that still in this day and age people get treated differently as well as abused; and because you used a name it becomes more personal..touching write.

    Congrats on the win :)