Heaven or Hell

by kevin miller   Sep 26, 2013


Why do I do the things i do? I know I could do better, but whats the use?
For i have failed in my eyes and would it matter if I prayed or how much I cried?
I know he would forgive me and all I have done, for he is GOD and there is only one
and all my prayers have been answard and I am not sure why cause most of the time I am flying high.
Now that's the dope that I also love but does not compare to the great one above.
I want to be clean without the dope, for I know there is still hope.
I must do it now for tomorrow is to late, then I would not see my mother at the pearly gates.
I am sure she See's with eyes full of tears, wondering why I have wasted so many years.
Well I had my chance and I knew it all to well.....so do you think I made it.....or was I sent to Hell?

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  • 11 years ago

    by Colm

    There is an interesting question in this poem but I think it is too rough around tge edges to be effective. Simple spelling mistakes and not using a capital I are somewhat annoying for the reader.

    Also, poems dont have to ryhme and often trying to force rhyne can ruin a poem. I advise writing without rhyme to see how it goes.