by Some Random Human Oct 8, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Turn the page, on this storybook lie, |
Sums up any relationship I've been in, lol. You seem to be skilled in writing in song. Reading lots of your work and I'm impressed. Some of the line in this are ultra moving and powerful. But a few forced rhymes you could easily replace for better ones. 5/5 |