\"GoNe\"

by Emily   Jul 3, 2004


\"Gone\"

We were all out on a Friday night.
We were having a blast, no parent in sight.

People were talking and drinking all night long.
Susan said to Becky \" I think its time to go\" Becky said \"please just one more song\"

Susan knew that she needs to get Becky home because Becky was almost done with.
All Becky wanted was to stay and have a good time, so Susan agreed and said \"meet me in an hour on Broadway and 5th.\"

Susan knew she shouldn\'t of done it because no one else was sober but she did it anyway.
She left an hour later, with Becky no where to be found, so i thought to myself \" I wonder if she heard what i had to say?\"

Two hours later no one had come, so Susan went back. She was driving along and saw a object a lot bigger then a cat.

she pulled over and couldn\'t believe what her eyes were seeing.
It was her best friend Becky, and from her head she was bleeding.

She told her to hold on and that help was on its way.
But she was bleeding really bad, and dead on the sidewalk Becky would lay

Susan cried and asked Becky why she couldn\'t of gone with her when she asked.
"You could of grabbed a beer or two and came with me, it wasn\'t that big of a task."

Now you lay dead in the street with blood dripping from your head.
\" i guess it was my fault, i shouldn\'t of left and hope she heard what i said.\"

I\'m hurt because it was a Friday night that went completely wrong.
Becky was dead all because she wanted to hear just one more song.

Now i must go on with my life, Becky not in sight.
Please remember to never give into a drunk friend on a Friday night.

Please RATE!!! it means a lot
This story isnt true, sorry to lead you guys on, but that doesnt mean that it doesnt happen.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Michelle

    Awesome poem. It was really touching.
    Love, Michelle

  • 19 years ago

    by Brittany

    i loved your poem! it touched me, and i gave it a 5! i hope u dont feel guility and remeber everything happens for a reason!
    take care

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