Dazzle [Senyru]

This is a very beautiful poem. The lines hold so much imagery.

First line- I believe you are talking about stars or eyes or comparing eyes to stars that is just what I think. I loved this line though because you leave my mind to run wild in what I think you mean lol. I love how you said dazzle to describe lights too. It makes it sound so much better. When I think of dazzle I thknk of something beautiful that warms your heart and makes you fall in love with whoever or whatever you are writing for or about. Shine is also a perfect word because these lights could shine in your life or heart bringing hope to a dark day or something like that.

Second line- this line as a soft touch and warmth radiating from it. The key word here for me is her. So that makes me think of a person no doubt. You get list in her gazes. You are in love with this person and you are probably getting lost in her warmth and beauty. I loved this line because it is the key line that talks about the object of the poem :). The one you love.

Ending- The ending is the most beautiful line for sure. You are home in her heart. This is such a beautiful dedication to someone very special in your life. I think when you are in love the only one that makes you feel safe is them. You are home in your own little world with them. Anyway. Such a great poem. Though short it's beauty.