Lover [Senyru]

Again I say eyes are so beautiful to write about. I think what you are saying there... are that this person's eyes are like the stars and they sparkle with so much light. Eyes can really change a person's life. They can really heal a heart. I love how you also leading into the rest of the poem as well. The two lines connect well. I think what you are saying is that her eyes are what make the smile more beautiful. I love that as well. Smiles can show what a person is really feeling happy or sad. You can get lost in a person's smile and eyes which is why I think the third line is my favorite. You can feel loved by just looking at a person. They embrace you with love or their eyes. Anyway a great short poem overall. :) well written! !