Comments : Pathfinders Muse

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    1. Characterized by kindness, mercy, or compassion: a humane judge.

    2. Marked by an emphasis on humanistic values and concerns: a humane education.

    I really love this godly poem
    I would change "humanely" to humanly to avoid confusion as humanely is more often the last word in a sentence ideally

    Overall a great poem

  • 10 years ago

    by Amreen

    Lovely! Yakori, your words seemed to cast a beautiful and serene imagery afore me and I must say, you have done a wonderful job writing this. Really a delight to read. I really missed your words!

    Keep writing!

    :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    What a lovely write. Will ad to my fav

  • 10 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Assured that man is a mortal mammal,
    I glaringly pass many seasons as I further stride.
    Without any precise destination my fate is my eyes.
    Thus showing me the way to meet my rosy blossoms....

    This stanza did it for me, You are blessed with an amazing talent sister. Once again, am amazed with your command of english and how you just use such big words and make them fit and flow such lovely. I loved how you opened the poem with a line that also closed it, truly amazing my dear.