There is a lot of lost emotions within this write, like a soul with a lost cause. Hopelessness sits on each line...touching write.

The guitar stings emit my tears tonight.

^ guitar stings? typo perhaps? like Guitar strings, perchance? I could be wrong.

hmmm... you have some interesting lines, and descriptive images that I like as well as mystery. I feel this piece needs something more... I'm not sure what is it.

Nonetheless, I enjoyed it.