Yesturday- Short poem
by Amber Jan 10, 2014
|
Yesturday is another day gone, just like a feeling that could never go wrong...Yesturday is now the past, everything said and done will always last...Yesturday is now the day before, and every day that passes, you hurt me more and more.... |
Did You Like This Poem?
Latest Comments
-
10 years ago
by don
Sad and emotional, but lovely words
don -
10 years agoby Beautiful Soul
This is a good poem. And I loved the emotion even though it is a short poem. My only nitpick is that you should put it into a stanza form that way it will look better and stand out more. But again I loved the message you write about altogether. I can feel the pain this person is going through and you make the pain very vivid and sad. Overall this good and simple :)
