I love the vibrant rhythm, the metaphoric inventiveness, and the arrangement of words here.

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Something different. This reads gives a very mythical yet a read filled with mystery. I also liked how you have penned this. Well done and Congratulations on the win!

Wow! I must say, a deserved WIN! In love with the thought behind this and the poem! Amazing.

Keep writing:)

Woooooow.!!!

Beautiful poem by Novalyn Grace RR ~

She etches her words with beauty and dips them in moon dust! I say this because I feel romantically head over heels in the first stanza! She takes the beauty of moon and creates a romantic scene.

The separation of the word "Jumping" caused me to fall even deeper in love with this poem. To use creativity with words shows that writer is not afraid to take chances, and she has done that and more with this poem!

It's such a sad piece of loss and again the emotions are encased in such elegant and unique words. Just beautiful!!!