Comments : Pretty And Everlasting

  • 10 years ago

    by Everlasting

    This is so beautiful, I don't think i'm being bias by the title lol.

    but I seriously love that ending:

    Years later,
    I still hope you will know
    that you still appear
    like a Daisy to me--

    pretty and everlasting.

    ah who I am kidding, I actually like the whole poem. I like the atmosphere how it's tint with sadness but also it has this innocent and lovely feel. I also like the memories I'm taking into as well as how you engage the reader by asking a question to the other person. It's kind of a reminiscing moment but with that someone or only with you, I'm not sure. But While I was reading, I was picturing two people having a sweet conversation. I feel that this person doesn't see exactly what you see in her, she hates daisies and you see her as one, except that by a daisy to you, means that she is pretty and everlasting. It is sweet. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    There is an innocence to this write as it unfolds with a young love. How that love developed and the purity.

    To have found this innocent love and still hold on to it as years rolled by is priceless. I loved the read from start to finish...lovely!

  • 10 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    Wow, this is so amazing and the imagery used here is great

  • 10 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Great write

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    As with Everlasting - the ending is pure poetry! Lovely, well written piece.