Losing It

by Noah Mullins   Feb 5, 2014


Me
I'm not stupid
But this mind
Remains polluted
In here
I am secluded
Silence surrounds me
Where is my music?
Unloved
I feel I'm intrusive
Defeat in my eyes
I make excuses
Honestly; I think
I'm about to lose it
Keep it together man
Your dreams have grown lucid

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  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    At times we have all felt this way honestly. I like how you started tje poem with "me". It seems like you are writing this poem to yourself and trying to make you happy. Which is always a good thing. Your mind is polluted with bad thoughts and it's very hard to overcome that. Anyway this is a really good write. The wording is great in spots and help the poem flow well. Nice write!

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