Numbness

by Karima   Feb 10, 2014


Feeling of numbness
Taking over the pain
From all the crying
Arises Nothing
Am I dead or is this a phase of life
Picking up the blade to feel
So death won't come
And free me forever from pain
Can I live my life for another day
Or will tomorrow come crashing on me

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  • 11 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Nice juices going here 5\5

  • 11 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    I liked the sadness you hold through out this poem and each line holds a different kind. The imagery is very nice as well. I liked the wording you used to get ypur point across. I personally like how you used no punctuation because it leaves it more free flowing. Feeling should be feelings. Otherwise good poem. 5/5

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