Comments : Without You - There's Nothing - I'm Nothing
7 years ago
by Midnight Sky
Long but good keep it up
5 years ago
by Ben Pickard
I am glad I stumbled on this - it is brilliant. It has such a unique flavour, and the spacing gives it such a perfect stuttering flow, if that makes any sense at all. It works wonderfully.
It has a surreal feel to it with the way your mind wonders throughout - the whole hour-glass thing is excellent. You weren't smoking anything illegal when writing this were you? lol
lucky me I read this one. .. I like it even the repetition of some lines making this write sounds like a song. ...I like the imaginary and the emotion. ...you need to close your eyes just to see him. ..damn I can relate to this one. ..
in regards to the last image you gave me i was taken back timidly. the close of the prose, For me, is far too sullen. But the composition here is fantastic... I see what you mean of course -which lead one unto some eagerness to " justify" the details and images used in your piece . . . Contemplating. Tantalizing. Fun.