Comments : Fall

  • 11 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Amazing, I freakin' love this poem. :)

    • 11 years ago

      by Maher

      Haha thank you :) It's nothing like my others but I thought I'd try a dark one

  • 11 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    It's really great, way to try something new. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Karla

    Wish I had a vote left.

    • 11 years ago

      by Maher

      All good. Thanks for giving it a read :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I am much on the dark side and I love this poem. You did an excellent job with this one

    • 11 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    Judges comments

    This poem is epic, there is so much detail in each and every stanza. Nice to have a little rhyming scheme going on as well. I am partial to the odd rhyming poem, It is a skill that is fast being lost. It is far easier to pour out you feelings onto a page with little or no structure and call it a masterpiece. I blame the painters who chuck paint at a canvas from 6 feet away and call it art. I digress... I have chosen to give this 7 points because of its structure, I like the way each stanza is interwoven with the words 'I fall' I love the attention to detail in each stanza. The scene and mood setting the darkness that rumbles underneath. If I was a decent commenter then I would be able to say so much more. However I am not but I believe I know a good poem when I see one. Well done.
    7 points.

    • 11 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks very much Darren. This is one of the darkest ones I've written aside from Ominous Intensity which is based on a nightmare. Thanks again for the feedback :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Mahesh Kachare

    Really best poem I ever read

    • 9 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks, glad you enjoyed it :)

  • 9 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Ive just seen this Maher. I love it. :) well done

    • 9 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks :)