This poem is epic, there is so much detail in each and every stanza. Nice to have a little rhyming scheme going on as well. I am partial to the odd rhyming poem, It is a skill that is fast being lost. It is far easier to pour out you feelings onto a page with little or no structure and call it a masterpiece. I blame the painters who chuck paint at a canvas from 6 feet away and call it art. I digress... I have chosen to give this 7 points because of its structure, I like the way each stanza is interwoven with the words 'I fall' I love the attention to detail in each stanza. The scene and mood setting the darkness that rumbles underneath. If I was a decent commenter then I would be able to say so much more. However I am not but I believe I know a good poem when I see one. Well done.