I love the structure and wording in this poem, the thoughts all seem to melt together, all connected, interlocked. It was an amazing read, there isn't alot of poetry that really stands out, but yours does. Loved it!!! :)

Any time. :)

Excellent work ,
nice rhythm

Well written c:

Looks like you have written a loop poetry making each one unravel like a yarn, unravelling your thoughts...good job!