Comments : Illusions I maintain

  • 9 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    This is really sad, i had a good time reading this, 5

  • 9 years ago

    by Cantchangeme

    Great poem,
    The last stanza is amazing
    and really ends the poem well

    "And let hollow night winds fill the void
    Of air that I displace."

    Sad and beautiful

  • 9 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Good show.

  • 9 years ago

    by LoneWolf

    Hmm, it definetly states emotion but what might be the cause?

  • 9 years ago

    by DarkNDangerous

    Deffinately liked this! Could relate and felt the emotion in this.

    ~AloneNHurt

  • 9 years ago

    by redxiii

    I really like the last six lines the best, but the whole thing was good to read. I give it 5/5 for sure. Great job.

  • 9 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Thank you redxii!!! XD

  • 9 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem does not miss a beat and reflects feelings hidden in the chambers of my heart

  • 9 years ago

    by Maher

    I normally just post my own stuff up here and not read others (d move, I know, but this is my way of venting), but the title of this poem caught my eye. The title may have caught my eye, but the last stanza caught my full attention. It's perfectly round and sums up a whole bunch of things personal to me - it's spherical. If you've seen the movie Sphere, you'll get this: 'I bet you could put a laser micrometer on this thing - you'll find that it's a perfect sphere".