Killed Me

by Steve_G   Jul 5, 2004


When i could smell
you smelt devine
When i could see
you looked damn fine
When i could hear
your voice was so sweet
Now i'm burried six feet under
my heart begins to weep
You were the only thing
that kept me alive
And the day that you left me
was the day that I died.

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  • 19 years ago

    by heather

    hey nice poem keep writing

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    Sad pem. But great! I'm sorry that someone broke your heart and hurt you soo much.

    Love,
    Ashley

  • 19 years ago

    by LiL One

    wow another sad one...Ims orry if this happened to u...keep ur head up, LiL One...nice poem

  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    so sad...but great poem, anyway. I love how smoothly it flows.

  • 19 years ago

    by Seth Rowley

    great poem but there's other fish in the sea, get over it and find someone new, i do know how you feel just keep your head up

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