Dead

by Steve_G   Jul 5, 2004


As i load the barrel
of an empty gun
Does anyone know
what i have done

Throughout my years
all that i've done
is caused grief and tears
to the ones that i love

Now the barrel is loaded
the guns against my head
I pull the trigger
now i'm dead

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    Great poem, short, to the point. Keep it up. You are a great poet.

    Love,
    Ashley

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    by foreverhappy

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  • 19 years ago

    by LiL One

    wow thats so real and sad...it was short and simple, but only a few words can say a million things...nicely written...LiL One

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    by PnQ Mod Account

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  • 19 years ago

    by Brittany

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