Comments : Two moons Before

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I love it when you're random... Random is beautiful Luce!

    The message within this piece reminds me of the civil war... thats my random take on this poem. Or, a bird sending a message in the wind... I really like poems that take me on several analogies!! Thank you for sharing this piece, I LOVE IT!

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    What I got from this is about a strong individual who was up for anything until life took a wrong turn. Soon negativity and pushing for the end takes control of the mind. I could see an image of a woman sitting in a corner crying, making the hardest decision. Liked this random write!