by Dragon Boy Jun 12, 2014
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
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Captivity |
by Em
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Robie, the imagery and description in this piece really work well. The rhyming and structure make it run so smoothly. |
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I'm intregied by this poem I couldn't help but look at life in another way it's enjoyable to read dark poems instead of love since dark poems are ingenious to read to inspire to write great work hun 5/5 |
by Dragon Boy
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Thnx Bet, i really appreciate you reading my poem! |
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I'm intregied by this poem I couldn't help but look at life in another way it's enjoyable to read dark poems instead of love since dark poems are ingenious to read to inspire to write great work hun 5/5 |
by Dragon Boy
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Thnx so much for your comment bet. i appreciate it :) |
by mazzy star
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Robert, I loved the whole poem. For me, every stanza of your poem captivity is so captivating. |
by Dragon Boy
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Thanx Vanilla sky for your nice comment :-) |
by DeviousCharmer
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I love the first paragraph a lot. I love the descriptive words you chose . They all made it seem like a storybook. I like how you dove deep into your emotions and put them on the poem . Thats really cool. So overall I really like the poem. |
by Dragon Boy
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Thanks.. :) |