by Nikki Jun 12, 2014
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
If I didn't know better |
I love everything. ...might I make a tiny suggestion? In the end put "but" after "dammit" or "yet I still love the story Nikki |
by Nikki
Thank you i love the suggestion :) |
by BlueJay
I really like the way your voice shines through here and you gave this piece a personality, more than likely your personality, without taking anything away from the story or the emotion. Speaking of which the emotion and conflict in this piece was penned spot on. Excellent write. |
by Nikki
Thank you :) |