Love, Regrets, Hatred

by Sweet Angel   Jun 13, 2014


Why must I met you?
If you would not be true
Why must I love you?
If it will only turn me blue!

I thought you are my destiny
But you've changed suddenly
Why did you hurt me?
This pain is killing me softly

Why did you gave me wings to fly
If you will just make me cry
Your love is nothing but a lie
I regret I gave it a try

I shouldn't trust you from the start
You broke not only my heart...
I swear I'll give you back the hurt
The same amount that you impart

This kind of suffocating love
Not worth my tears,why should I sob
I want to take revenge and get even...
Call me bad,you'll never be forgiven!

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  • 9 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    I agree with Adreamer, rhymes and flow weren't as smooth as they could have been! Also something with the first line just doesn't seem right.. "Why must I met you"?
    Aside from that it was good, keep up the good work! xo

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    The purpose of this piece and the voice turned out really well here. I think the rhymes feel a bit forced and your flow is sorta choppy, but its still a decent piece. A very well done piece.

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