Niceread!

WOW a great poem, lots of feelings and depth.

Beautifully described..loved it :)

It felt so sad :(

nice poem

This poem is so heartfelt and raw I can't do any commenting that is long since it's too beautiful and tragic and for a good reason that is so personal I can't comment and break it apart like I normally can it's impossible so here's what I will say: it's emotional, it's dedicated to a family member you loved and love still, never stop loving them for any reason but heal hun 5/5

-Mori

I find it hard to comment on poems such as this because of the nature of them but I just wanted to say that you penned this amazingly, truely, it is pure emotion, raw but perfect. Your love for this person shines through and although it is sad...I have to admit to smiling too, the way you used your vocabulary makes that possible.

Simply great.

This is beautiful, sad and passionate. It's a great memoir for somebody who passed away and would go very well on there gravestone.

5/5