This poem should be in "life" catagory my dear and under religion I believe? either way it's adorable 5/5

-Bet

*EDIT version ALright I like the flow I like the way it was put in because it's always better as centered and then you have to put enter so it looks like a waterfall next I like the emotions put in and also the way that it made you look at it and this is a smaller version of a bible I know I haven't read mine in so long but I do know for a fun (not a really fun fact since it's horrible what they do to people back in the days)fact that had to hurt ALOT but either way it's a good poem just not in the right category

No problem hun :)

-Bet

Well done! U definitely captured the truth that Jesus loves us. I do like how u were not afraid to talk about the brutal details of His suffering its seems that many people try to sugar coat the death burial and resurrection of our Saviour. I gave it 5 good job!

Good one Cathy! I remember reading that those who love the Lord cannot stay far from him. Your poem reminds me of the poem I wrote about Jesus called "Just an ordinary day". Your poem reflects the worlds best love story of the rich one who became poor for us. As you wrote he knew no sin but took the punishment we all deserved, the just dying for the unjust. Ken

He died that we might live through Him. Our part is to live like He loved. Heart of Sacrifice, who can lend?
Keep thinking and don't stop inking. Indeed another worthwhile try. Only try count down on diction; (that's the gap between poems and tales..).

He died that we might live through Him. Our part is to live like He loved. Heart of Sacrifice, who can lend?
Keep thinking and don't stop inking. Indeed another worthwhile try. Only try count down on diction; (that's the gap between poems and tales..).