Comments : Winter Kisses

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I like reading something about winter in the middle of summer. Especially when its as hot as it is here. So, good timing on that. The style here feels a little odd compared to some of your works, but change is good, so I can't really complain - its actually a refreshing kind of odd, if that makes any sense at all. For being a shorter piece, you really created a nice image and scene. Nice job

  • 9 years ago

    by Fenix Flight

    So simple yet so strong. I love it!!!! paints a lovely picture in my head and made me smile and think of the love of my life. :-D

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    What a beautiful little poem. It gives off a kind of good vibe about Winter, like the small things that are warm in it, and makes us enjoy it and look forward to it.

    Well done

  • 9 years ago

    by ryan woollard

    I love this poem it makes me think I actually there with all that going on around me 10/10

  • 9 years ago

    by CuteThingsGoneWrong

    This is really cute. Im really impressed x3 I enjoyed this simple poem

  • 9 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I remember a harsh critic who preached the limiting of personal pronouns
    none in this none and it is hard to write without them for most of us

    I feel this poem broke very few strict rules but the imagery and free flow make it appeal to me in so many ways

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Such a picture is painted here! The snow tells me it is winter time, that is clear. And the couples holding hands is simple but it says a lot. That tells me there are two people in love and holding hands is very romantic. I believe the two key words here are mistletoe and snow. Because they set up the scene so well. It tells me that it's Christmas time and a young couple are showing their love for each other. The poem as a whole is well written. For some people Christmas is a happy time to spend with loved ones no matter who they are. Great story overall. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Biancas Veil

    I love the peace that I feel from this poem, it is uplifting I have never seen the snow and this just makes me want to see it more.
    Well done