by Jaymi Lynn Jul 24, 2014
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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I wish I hadn't, but my eyes grew weary, |
by uttAm
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Loved it....short but great!! |
by Jaymi Lynn
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Thanks! |
by Baby Rainbow
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This is such a great little poem, I like the flow to it, I picked up a small beat/rhythm here and also a few subtle rhymes throughout which worked really well. |
by Jaymi Lynn
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Thank you so much! |