Comments : Script of life

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Our life is determined and planned out before we are greeted by the world..yes I agree and then there are some situations in life happens because of our doing too. No matter what there is always the higher power who knows what lies ahead..good one.

  • 9 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Believing in the reincarnation theory ,souls choose their home and parents according to their desire.

  • 9 years ago

    by Jad

    The poem was very simplistic, yet the lines hold a certain truth that is echoed through many different interpretations. I loved the imagery you used as it created a nice picture to see as I read and the rhyming was a nice touch as well. Kept the poem flowing from the beginning till the end.

    "Let's write a script
    Thy has no conflict"

    For this stanza, I was curious if perhaps you meant to say "that" instead of "thy". It would make it flow it a bit better and sound more natural.

    All in all, this was a great poem that lets us all think about how we are part of something bigger than all of us. I can't wait to read some more poems by you. Great job and keep writing.

    • 9 years ago

      by alka mendiratta

      Austin ,initially I wrote 'That' ,read the poem to my hubby and he suggested write'Thy'.Without any thought I changed it .
      Thank you for the suggestion .

  • 9 years ago

    by Sylvia

    God has written that script for us and I have learned that when we try to change the script according to what we think it should be, then the problems begin. We should always follow God's plan and script, will lessen the heartaches and problems in our lives. Nice work.

  • 9 years ago

    by Augastus Black

    I would say that vitality is truely fabulous. But there are many people who are not writing their Script of life in a right way. I am really very sorry for them.

  • 8 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Woh, a great poem! Short and simple, but so profound! Life is indeed like a script, of which we all have a part to play.

    Well written and expressed my friend! :)

  • 8 years ago

    by gumshuda

    This poem is excellent aunty alka.
    I wonder how come i didn't read this till now. :)

  • 8 years ago

    by uttAm

    You've done a great job with this piece Alka ji...:)
    deeper meanings with simple words and i liked the rhyming too.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    I truly believe 'life is like a script'

    This is powerful and truthful.

    Take care, Em

  • 6 years ago

    by Lucifer

    It's really brave of you to write such a deep piece with fewer words.

  • 5 years ago

    by Khadz

    Wow ! I had read it again and again this poem is so touched and close to my heart ... direct to my fav.