Comments : Affair

  • 9 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Imagery is so important when it comes to dark poetry, I've figured it out finally. But with you raising the bar and taking it another step darker? Truly amazing.

    I caught myself reading aloud again ( I got a few weird looks ) and it just sounds so much more... Realistic. I love it.

    Now... The last line though... Was it really a goat???? O.o

    • 9 years ago

      by Jack Nightengale

      Hahaha no it wasn't a goat but because the guy basically made her lover watch him penetrate her and kill her like a pig, it was his way of comparing her to a dirty animal.