The Way Out

by ShadowsEmber   Sep 16, 2014


Lurking in the shadows
Youll never find your way
Giving into darkness only
Feeds the pain.
You never know if tomorrow
Will bring rain or sorrow
But still
Sometimes even when
Youre lost in the darkest part
Of woods you can
See the rays of
Sunlight on the
Branches. That, my
Friend, is your
Way out

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  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I like this piece, there is a very simple feel to it and yet your point gets across well and your theme is well developed. I think it would fit better in the life category though, if I may say so. Anyway, Awesome write Zoei, the only thing I would suggest is reformatting the piece or trying to give it some "shape". Because right now just being words sort of distracts your flow and makes it a little more difficult for the reader to follow. (I still have this problem from time to time too, or I would suggest a solution.)

    Anyway, great write :)

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