Comments : 5 Senses

  • 9 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Hmmmmmmmmmmmm
    wawo nice poem.
    well done.

  • 9 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Aww.

    • 9 years ago

      by moon face

      I'm really glad someone as profound as you liked my poem. : )

  • 9 years ago

    by WW

    I enjoyed the originality here. Its simple and sweet. It started off with me thinking that coming up with poetry aabout this individual must be difficult (I can relate) and jumps over to the plethora of poems you've come up with. That brought a lot of movement and action to the piece! Pretty awesome.

    • 9 years ago

      by moon face

      Thanks a lot Tarnish :D! Your comment made me really happy <3

  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Aaww this is so so so cute!!!! :-P