Very deep and full of emotions.

This made me cry. I'm so sorry for everything that's happened momma. I know you miss her like crazy, I do too. Just please stay strong <3 I love you so much. this poem is ingenious and beautiful and sad and tragic. I love you oh so much <3 5/5

What a touching poem, it is deep with loss, and the way you have kind of "told" the story so that someone who is unaware of these people, can understand the situation, but to also see the affect it has on everyone around them, and also get to know the people too. It was very touching to read.

She grabbed her daughters
stuff animals and everything else and
burned it all.

Daughters should be daughters' just to keep with the fact there are two of them. And "stuff" should be "stuffed"

- a very powerful image right there, that tiny moment where she clings on to anything that makes her feel close to them, but then burns it all because the pain of feeling close, but not close enough, is too overwhelming.

this poem really does go deep, and speaks of what I believe is one of the hardest losses someone can go through in life.

Very deep ...well written

Wow, this is an amazing poem. It goes deep into the heart and shows so much emotion! Amazing job! ^_^ 5/5

*~BrittBratt~*

Wow, this is an amazing poem. It goes deep into the heart and shows so much emotion! Amazing job! ^_^ 5/5

*~BrittBratt~*

A touching poem that will surely bring tears to the reader. Losing someone is a very hard moment in ones life. The pain might go away but the memory of the people you lost will never be gone.